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Lesley Dent by ~Jeniekins:iconJeniekins:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Family Life > Open


She was asleep
They were in bed
In the middle of the night
She was dead

A ring of change
Was to perturb
Her change to vacuous
Was not to disturb

She'll be ok
She'll fly like a dove
She's met Janus
The star form above
©2005-2009 ~Jeniekins
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Author's Comments

A poem written in memory of my great aunt. <?(Well my dads aunt, so i think thats what she is to me) She died the other day, in the night as you might gather from the poem. Her and my great uncle were on holiday, and my gran has been out to help my great uncle (David) sort things out. Hopefully, soon, Lesley will be back in the uk. I'll miss her and won't forget her.

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~squal Mar 29, 2005, 11:08:32 PM
Nice, nice... good to see a poem that rhymes for once! lol :D Keep it up!

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~Jeniekins Mar 30, 2005, 1:15:41 PM
thankies! you finally got logged in!! well done *pats* :glomp:
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~squal Mar 30, 2005, 1:33:35 PM
lol, yup :P your welcome!

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~reckless-void Apr 1, 2005, 9:12:35 AM
heh I really like this one.you know all your poems are really good.You really dont need and critiqueing but then again you cant really critique a poem because its a meir expression of mood feeling and soul.
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~Jeniekins Apr 2, 2005, 1:46:42 PM
Thank you! i'm really pleased you like all my poems!! :hug:
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~VampiresPromise Apr 4, 2005, 8:03:27 AM
I like the rhyme scheme in it. For this it works very well.

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~Jeniekins Apr 6, 2005, 5:09:44 AM
thankies once again :D
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~VampiresPromise Apr 6, 2005, 5:34:53 AM
De rien once again. :lol:

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~soul-teaser Apr 6, 2005, 12:10:42 PM
*hugglses*

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