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Everything that shimmers is sure to fade away
I left because I saw the light fading out
It's easier to leave than to be left behind
You knew my heart had been broken before
[ Didn't you now? Didn't you? ]
I trusted you to sew it back together
Then make it strong again
I thought you knew a once broken heart
Is easy to tear apart
Obviously not!
I told you forever
     I love you forever
I told you I love you
     I love you forever
You told me forever
And love - love will be my strongest weapon
I do beleive that I am not alone
But I am what I am
It's knowing now where I am weakest
And the voice in my head
I turn away my head away
If I look back i'm not sure I could face you
Not again, not today
There's a hurt deep down that has not been corrected
There's a voice in me that say 'You Will Not Win'
I wanted it to be wrong
If you offered me your had again i'd have to walk away
And it's up to you to fix it
I want the truth to set me free
Do I even dare to speak? - - to dream? - - beleive?
Just us
No war . No hate. No past
I'm here, i'm yours
I just want to fly
Just you and I, together
It's a long, long long road
And I don't know which way to go
Look at this, it's me, walking away
©2005-2009 ~Jeniekins
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Author's Comments

This poem was written for a very dear friend Mikey! It was written before christmas at a very bad, personal stage in Mikey's life and i didn't feel at that time, it was right to submit this! It was written from the song lines from REMs "Around the world" album, and its possibly my favourite poem i've written. Some of the lines are so strong that i might write a poem on the influence of one or two of the lines! Anyway mikey, here tis, this is for you :glomp:

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:iconmornie1:
A very beautiful poem! I liked it a lot =)

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Heart of Flame...
:iconjeniekins:
Awww thankies! i spent a long time working on it, and i think it was worth it! :) :glomp:
:icontrappedinfreedom:
Beautiful, just beautiful. I love it, it sounds more like a story then a poem, more like a song if anything :D. Hah, im blushing :blush:, beautiful my dear, just beautiful. :hug:

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:flagcanada: Proud Canadian :salute:
:iconjeniekins:
hehe, i guess it is more like song! its very special to me aswell! glad you like it :hug:
:icontrappedinfreedom:
I dont like it, i LOVE it :!: :blowkiss:

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:flagcanada: Proud Canadian :salute:
:iconjeniekins:
:glomp: lol! ok you love it! special poem just for you!! :hug:
:iconsoul-teaser:
:tears: i love it ^_^

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Moo :petting:
Meuh :confused:
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Mugido :lmao:
Muggito :rofl:
Muja ^^;
Mej :excited:
Ammuu :evileye:

Multiculteral cows!!!
:iconjeniekins:
awww... thankies! don't crie :hug:
:iconvampirespromise:
Very nice. Though I would say a bit of punctuation so it doesnt seem like some of it is going on forever.

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In the screams of many, not one voice is heard over all the others except silence.

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